Hello one and all it is me the humble scribe that is writing this little fan fiction, I kinda went off the deep end when I wrote the whole chapter. I am proud of that chapter in how it advanced the story before and after the action while also growing the charater of Tarphus in the brutal combat however I must admit that I was mildly disturbed with the amount of gore that I could produce.
This lead me to ask myself if the gore was appropriate, or if I should (going forward) slim it down. However, Tarphus's challenges will be as gory as I can make it, without hurling (much) of course. Now I feel some pressure as a semi-writer I wanted to make sure that this would be a good direction for my story.
Stolen novel; please report.
Long story short I want to put as much 40k into this as possible as I love the lore and the discriptions but I feel slightly ill of the gore that comes to mind here. Now some might think of this as me being a wuss and you might have a point however when I write I am there.
I see through the eyes of my creations I live through them their hatred is mine their fears consume me their drive heal me and their goals revive me. So when I kill off a character I feel the smoke and flashes of light etc.
So please let me know what you all think, I will do what I can to make this an enjoyable read but that will take time for me no mater what you guys choose.
What is the amount of blood and gore that you all want?
