So with Chapter 30, the prologue is essentially finished. Between the prologue and Act 1:

  How many chapters, if any beyond one, do you want to cover the casual building of retionships/power, or jobs, during this time skip?

  Ages official for Act 1. The time skip will be 6 months to a year:

  Orion: 16, Vi: 15, Powder: 11-12, Caitlyn: 15, Jayce: 24.

  Orion's current powers:

  Light healing, and various usages of raw magic that aren't overpowered.

  I believe the gap between Act 1 and Act 2 is 7 years.

  Time for the goods and bads, starting with the goods:

  The Good:

  I believe the parts I excelled in during the prologue were the a sequences. Specifically, the best chapters were probably 22-28.

  There were plenty of good ideas for the story to branto too. Almost too many if I took the time.

  I almost thought about making Orion follow d bee a plete vilin, plimenting the inal "C" lore.

  Chapter length also gradually improved from 500-700 to start up to 1000-1500 toward the end. I felt like some of the (Shorts) I did were far more impactful than the long ones, however.

  The problem that es with it of course is brevity, and being too shallow.

  The Bad:

  eg points t in the main cast, just because I wahem in, was weak and a weak reason. No doubt, but I'm not upset about it.

  75% of chapters were written on the day, with nht or pnning.

  Twice it occurred when I wrote outlines for a few future chapters ahead but it was derailed quickly.

  ces and veniences leading to introdus.

  I tried to ba out with Orion beien/humiliated in different ways as the attempted to ba for better or worse.

  Dialogue is another obvious weakness.

  The simplest response received for improvement on dialogue: read more books. Alrighty.

  With that:

  Please leave critiques, ents, suggestions, or anything else you want in the eion or reviews!

  This is not a story where the MC bees a master of everything, that should be obvious with how much he gets his ass kicked.

  He will receive one or two more powers during the time skip if anyone wants to make suggestions on that.

  I am thinking about an inal book diving into the steampunk city realm mixed with magic mented powers, inspired because of writing this. I mentio briefly ba the first A/N too.

  Right now, it's just cepts of the city and lore.

  My writing still improve heavily with this fanfi.

  Name your favorite Christmas song in a ent here!