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A Girl who lost her emotion because of her family and can''''t trust anyone but herself.A Boy to weak to fight but having to trains since he had the responsibilitys of a leader, and thus becoming one of the strongest individuals of time.What will happen when they fall in love and many oppose this union ? What will happen when they are betrayed and forced to walk alone again ?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This is the fist time I write my thoughts down so I would like to be critisised ... but please only if it helps ok ?If you read my story and like it please tell me your thoughts as well and maybe even where you think this will lead ... many heads have more power to imagne a good story then one alone after all ;) Statistics Overall Score .star-4551-overall-86c3af1d42b548b391f4d73e3ccc6b11:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 1,570 Average Views : 785 Followers : 2 Favorites : 0 Ratings : 0 Pages : 9 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author