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My first try at writing a story all other times I stopped after a page or 2. This will be the pre-edited version because I know that there are a lot of problems with it. If anyone can help me edit it before I actually put the edited version on RR thanks :).Virtual Reality has been around for a few years but until now it was not full immersion in the sense that all monsters, creatures, and people in the VR world were scripted and some of the scripting was terrible. With the introduction of Multi-life, everything within this Virtual Reality has their own A.I. Statistics Overall Score .star-2395-overall-b4c5ebfb98e4485c835587f89c8cf344:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 993 Average Views : 993 Followers : 1 Favorites : 0 Ratings : 0 Pages : 24 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author